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Michelle Cox's avatar

Hi Mel another really important aspect. I like what is there however I think the fear is even greater than you have penned. Those that I know are really terrified and I think it’s worth an angle / persona to describe quite frankly the very dark fear of inheritance as it can be almost ( dramatic maybe) paralysing for some - just a thought!

Mel Rosenthal Coach's avatar

Thanks Michelle. I really appreciate you raising this. It’s helped me see what I was holding back - out of my own fear.

Fear of “being dramatic” perhaps…but I think more fear of being repetitive. There is so much fear in every aspect of these chapters and I was subconsciously worrying about overplaying it.

But maybe that’s EXACTLY the point and I could stop shying away from it and make it a stronger theme.

Thank you!